‘Nurturing Individual Excellence’

English - 01.04.20

Note: if you would like any additional support with this piece of writing, please get in touch.

Task: Writing

  • Your task is to write a diary entry from the perspective of Alfie from Listen to the Moon.
  • You are going to write as though it is the day after finding Lucy in the Pest House.
  • I have included several documents below which are designed to support you. If you need any further help, please get in touch.
    • The documents attached are as follows:
      • WAGOLL (What A Good One Looks Like) - this is my version and will give you a good guide as to what you're aiming for.
      • Suggested Writing Ordered Plan - this breaks down which sections you could do each day. It's just a guide - you may do it differently if you wish.
      • Planning Template - this document includes questions to prompt ideas for a plan. You may plan in a different way if you wish.
      • Phrase and sentence bank - this includes ideas to include in your writing.
      • Success criteria - this is a ticklist which you can use to ensure you have included the relevant features.
      • Progression of Sentences - you may find this document useful to vary your sentence structure.

Note: this piece is designed to take 3 English session - about 2 and a half to 3 hours to complete.

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