‘Nurturing Individual Excellence’

English - 03.04.20

Task 1: Complete Alfie's journal entry if not already done so. The information below is identical to Wednesday's. Please click here to go to Wednesday's English page to access the documents detailed below.

Note: if you would like any additional support with this piece of writing, please get in touch.

Task: Writing

  • Your task is to write a diary entry from the perspective of Alfie from Listen to the Moon.
  • You are going to write as though it is the day after finding Lucy in the Pest House.
  • I have included several documents below which are designed to support you. If you need any further help, please get in touch.
    • The documents attached are as follows:
      • WAGOLL (What A Good One Looks Like) - this is my version and will give you a good guide as to what you're aiming for.
      • Suggested Writing Ordered Plan - this breaks down which sections you could do each day. It's just a guide - you may do it differently if you wish.
      • Planning Template - this document includes questions to prompt ideas for a plan. You may plan in a different way if you wish.
      • Phrase and sentence bank - this includes ideas to include in your writing.
      • Success criteria - this is a ticklist which you can use to ensure you have included the relevant features.
      • Progression of Sentences - you may find this document useful to vary your sentence structure.

Note: this piece is designed to take 3 English sessions - about 2 and a half to 3 hours to complete.

I have also included a 1,2,3 Writing piece below if you have completed the journal entry and would like something else to write.

Task 2: Comprehension Task:

  • Please read chapter two of Listen to the Moon by Michael Morpurgo.
  • Complete the questions below.
  • Check your answers and review any errors.

Thanks

Mr. Hancock

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