‘Nurturing Individual Excellence’

English - 30.06.20

Task 1: Practise your editing skills

  • Read the Writing Extract below and add or change punctuation as needed.
  • You can either edit it directly on the Word Document, print the PDF or just look through it and decide where the punctuation should be.

Task 2: Write sentences based on on film action shots

  • Look at the images on the Action Shots PPT.
  • Write at least five sentences. You can either write separate sentences or a combined paragraph - feel free to write more than five sentences.
  • Here are two examples of mine:​​​​​​​
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    • (Picture 1) - With a gentle push from the floor, Mando was propelled upwards, the engines from the jet pack carrying him upwards.
    • (Picture 2) – Slowly, cautiously, Merrida pulled her right arm backwards until her thumb brushed gently against her cheek bone.
  • ​​​​​​​I have also included the Progression of Sentences​​​​​​​ to help you.

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